After going through my groups rough drafts there were several
things that stood out. Of course this was a rough draft and several things will
be expected. Some standard stuff I noticed while I read were grammatical
errors, wording, and generally rough prose. As I went through my groups drafts I
made corrections and offered advice for possible changes. After this there was
a commonality I noticed with 2 out of 3, lack of meeting the 4 page limit. This
ultimately can be chalked up to lack of content or just not thinking about the
topic enough. I personally suggested to these partners maybe writing a
paragraph about how you would change the ad to make it more effective. Another
common issue was repeating information several times. I feel that this might be
tied in with lack of content but it’s an easy fix. I tried to point this out
when I saw it.
There were also several things the drafts did well. All of
the drafts broke down the ads pretty well, Monica did an excellent job. I feel
like in all the drafts after the first 2 paragraphs the writers really opened up
and provided better and more genuine thought. I feel that all the drafts are
pretty good in essence however with some small tweaks they can truly be great!
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